Friday, 19 November 2010

First 4 pages work in progress

These are the first 4 pages 4 my book as they are so far They need a bit more work and Ive got about 7 more to edit but I want them all to match the first 2 at the top. and as Ive got until thursday now Ill definatly get it done!


  1. This is a challenging subject matter you're tackling here, well done for stepping up to it.
    things seem to be really coming together too, I would just say to consider the legibility of the text, some words could be hard to read.
    and man am I glad we got till thursday!

  2. Writing has been tweaked now I need to print thanks 4 ur comment and see u on thurs! :D



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